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Monday, August 8, 2011

Felts Writing Activity

On Saturday after noon. My ANNOYING brother was playing around with the PS2 Controllers. I ran to get them and tripped up on the very LONG  A.V cords and the whole of the Very HUGE PS2. It did a front flip and landed on its face. The player one memory card snapped in half! My uncle is going to download the save files we had because he is a genius with ps2's and computers. It sounded like BANG!!!

2 comments:

  1. Great story Darian but theres not many onomatopaiea"s.

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  2. Hey Darian can you put in more onomatopaiers ?

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