W.A.L.T: Use metaphors and similes.
On Saturday me and my cousin josh went to the splash center because my auntie had to go to the gym. The pool was as cold as a fresh crusher from K.F.C. I went on the hydro slide and hit my head on the side of it. The lump was a big Buffalo. This morning My mum cut my hair and she kept on hitting it on the side. IT HURT!!!
It sounds like it hurt a lot.
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